I’m not sure if this works as a comic or not. I think I kind of got what I wanted out of the art. The polaroid in the second panel does appear inexplicably, but there is a hand near a pocket in the first panel. Hopefully other people just don’t think about things like that. But what really worries me, is that the writing doesn’t indicate what’s going on: that he’s decided against dying / having a heart attack because his enemy still exists, and his animosity towards that individual wills him to be alive. That seems like it should be a good comic, right